Week 10 Story: What Summer Thought of Being Taken from the Sky
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Once upon a time when the Earth was new, there was only one season, Winter. The people of Earth, whether of the plains, the mountains, or the oceanside, lived in fear of the North Wind. As the Earth was still so young, there was still plenty of magic in it. The North Wind possessed some of this magic and was so powerful that he could shapeshift into the form of a human. The waters of the Earth were always icy, if not completely frozen over. The ground was caked with snow and thus mostly infertile. Earth’s people made thick clothes and large fires to battle the North Wind’s blows, and they questioned why they were subjected to such harsh conditions.
Perhaps you know the tale of the great O-jeeg who brought down the Summer from the heavens so that Earth’s peoples could enjoy its warmth. Brought down also were Spring and Autumn. These four seasons have since shared the responsibility of watching over the Earth. The North Wind was most displeased to be limited in his rule. His enemy was, of course, the South Wind, or Summer, the one who was responsible for the lush summers. Whereas the North Wind’s world was frozen, white, and would chill the Earth’s people to the bone, the South Wind was color, warm breezes, fertility, and life.
The South Wind was, in fact, quite sad to have been brought down to the Earth. Although he loved providing the Earth with warmth and comfort, he missed the celestial heavens greatly. Spring and Autumn did not seem to mind their time on Earth, but the South Wind often grew melancholic when his quarter year was up. He, like the other seasons, still had magic from the beginning of creation in him and would often transform into a human when his job was done. The South Wind would often climb a large mountain in this form and smoke his pipe while looking down at Earth’s valleys and rivers. When night came, he would look up at the stars and remember his time dancing among them. Wondering if he would ever be allowed to play in the heavens again, he drifted off to sleep until he was called upon to work again.
After centuries of living through this same cycle, the South Wind climbed his mountain once more preparing to smoke, watch the stars, and then sleep. The Creator knew of the dreams of Summer and hoped to assuage his worries. Once Summer had gone to sleep, the Creator gave him a dream. In the dream, the South Wind saw the end of the world. It was much more peaceful than he would have imagined. The Earth was swallowed by the sun, and the seasons were once again allowed to soar through the heavens. When he awoke, Summer knew that his time on Earth was only temporary, and this comforted him through the following millennia.
Author’s Note: The inspiration for this story comes from the American Indian Fairy Tales unit. I have used Shin-ge-bis Fools the North Wind in which both the North and South Winds are personified, as well as How the Summer Came in which all of the seasons but Winter are brought down from the sky. In Shin-ge-bis, the South Wind is said to go to the top of a hill every year and smoke after his job is done before he sleeps and the North Wind takes over. These actions seemed very melancholic to me, so I wanted to explore this and depict what the Summer thought of being brought down from the sky. I added the dream to the ending, as no such Creator was mentioned in the tales. I hoped to give the Summer some comfort in a semi-unfortunate situation.
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Hey Bridget!
ReplyDeleteI can't imagine there only being one season in today's world. I love how the season's change but if I had to pick my least favorite season it would be winter so this would not be my ideal world. I think it is cool that you kind of personified the seasons by giving them duties. Your story was beautifully written and in a weird way it kind of relaxed me. Keep up the good work!
Hi Bridget! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I thought you personified Summer really well and made it seem like it was a real person with real feelings. I like how you showed how Summer was basically homesick and then gave the story an optimistic ending. I also like how this story was inspired by multiple other stories instead of just one.
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ReplyDeleteI am glad to see that other people were so taken with the American Indian Fairy Tales unit, as I was! I always think that stories that incorporate elements of the earth are so beautiful. In this unit especially (I am sure it is for all though), the amount of symbolism was so heavy, but it really makes it so unique! I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did!
Hello again! Having one season all year long would be brutal especially Winter which is my least favorite. I like how you almost made Summer have human like qualities or feelings that the reader could sense. I thought you did a great job with detail and the writing was very good. I enjoyed reading this story and hope to read more soon!
ReplyDeleteHi Bridget! Great job with this story — you use beautiful, descriptive language and create characters out of something as ordinary as the wind. One thing I did wonder at was the ending — it seemed a bit abrupt. Why did summer only suddenly realize its time on earth was temporary, and is "temporary" just referring to the changing of the seasons (or will there come a day when there is no summer?)? Otherwise, I thought this was a lovely and creative retelling!
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